Wednesday, 18 March 2015

Coursework feedback


Research and Planning – 16
Excellent and detailed filming schedule and risk assessment – excellent organisation of actors.  The script is detailed, but I would have like to see a more professional and traditional approach. With scene directions included. There is excellent work into the target audience, looking at media theorists and ideas about the standard age/gender groupings. However I would have liked to see some more secondary research (e.g. the BFI statistical yearbook) Research into existing products is detailed and relevant.
Main Task – 39
The material is appropriate for the target audience, and is clearly a proficient film opening in its narrative, style and dialogue. The titles follow conventions, and the red font is particularly fitting for the horror genre. There are some interesting sound edits, including cutaway’s with sound running underneath. Occasionally this isn’t so successful, but on the whole it is. There are a variety of shot distances and on the whole the framing is thoughtful. Editing helps with meaning on the whole, but there are one or two continuity issues, like when the group move from the bed to the floor too quickly.